Today the Hunters went on a hunt in the
forest. While they were hunting, they
heard the sound of an animal and Jack through his spear but it did not kill the
pig. I stayed behind and helped build
Hut 1 and Hut 2. I was too tired and
lazy to help with the third hut. Jack
and Ralph had an argument about which was more important, killing a pig for
meat or have a good shelter from the elements.
I am getting very annoyed of all the
fighting that is going on between everyone on the island. All Jack and Ralph do is argue about every
little thing. I think that the hunters
should split the group in half and some hunt and the others help build more
huts. If we all work together we could
get more stuff done in a shorter amount of time.
I think that Ralph will have to try and
build all the huts by himself while the hunters go and attempt to hunt for pigs
and meat. All Jack wants is meat and
sometimes it gets annoying. I also think
that the hunters might actually be able to hunt a pig successfully. Eventually, we will have meat and some huts
to eat in and sleep in and be out of the weather.
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ReplyDeleteI understood the first and third paragraph and the second paragraph was a little bit confusing.
ReplyDeletethis was a very good essay your paragraphs were very clear and easy to read.
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